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February 14th, 2016

More Pitch art for our fic From Nightmares to dreams! =D @ 06:56 pm


Another pic from frostydragon! Known on DA as Twintwosgirl! (twintwosgirl.deviantart.com/) and my Rise of the Guardians fic.



And of course, and excerpt to know what is going on :P

"When he saw the tendrils of dreamsand arching out across the sky, Pitch scowled, “Of course you would show up to fowl the lovely little nightmares I’ve worked so hard on.” No matter, he’d just steal them back he thought bitterly as he ducked under the child’s bed he’d been about to scare.
This happenstance had happened many a time before, and normally Pitch would move on to haunt another child’s dreams, but feeling indignant over his recent failures, he lay in wait to infect Sandy’s dreamsand with his own touch once the child had begun to smile obviously enjoying the dreams Sandy had emitted.

Unlike previously where when Pitch had touched the sand it had corrupted and turned black and jagged, this time the golden sand seemed to attach to his fingertips. Instinctively Pitch pulled away as if he’d been bitten, but the dreamsand was like an angry swarm of bees amassing through the window and whirling around first his arm and then the rest of him as Pitch swatted madly at the sand terrified of having the reverse of what he’d done to the Sandman in their last battle happen to him, but his efforts were in vain, and he was quickly engulfed in the sands coated in flecks of gold that adhered to him. "

 
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From:ficwriterjet
Date:February 15th, 2016 03:37 pm (UTC)
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The excerpt along with the picture is perfect. You caught the moment wonderfully. :)

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From:spankingfemme
Date:February 15th, 2016 05:59 pm (UTC)
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Thanks! I was envisioning it in my head but that can be difficult to translate into art sometimes. Glad it worked out!
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From:ashmedai
Date:February 16th, 2016 04:02 am (UTC)
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Good visual to accompany the excerpt! I don't know if you'd like some concrit on the excerpt itself...?
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From:spankingfemme
Date:February 16th, 2016 04:15 am (UTC)
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Sure :)
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From:ashmedai
Date:February 16th, 2016 04:23 am (UTC)
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Let me PM you...it could use something! :)
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From:spankingfemme
Date:February 16th, 2016 04:24 am (UTC)
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okay
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From:a_phoenixdragon
Date:February 16th, 2016 10:55 pm (UTC)
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Ohhh, that is PERFECT!!

*HUGS*
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From:spankingfemme
Date:February 17th, 2016 12:27 am (UTC)
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*snugs!* Thanks baby! It feels good to put out some art
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From:777aaa
Date:March 4th, 2016 05:25 pm (UTC)
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Interesting art sweety ;)
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From:spankingfemme
Date:March 8th, 2016 12:48 am (UTC)
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Thanks my sweet! =D I'm very pleased with the way this one came out. It's a scene from the story I've been writing, so it might be confusing without reading the caption :P
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From:777aaa
Date:March 8th, 2016 10:21 am (UTC)
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I try to read it when I can :p
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From:dancingdragon3
Date:March 13th, 2016 02:22 am (UTC)
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Wow. I came by to see how you were doing, and obviously, fine. That's a great collaboration you have going. I'm jealous! The story sounds very cool. I'm sorry I haven't been by here before. Congrats!
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From:spankingfemme
Date:March 13th, 2016 02:25 am (UTC)
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Thanks! =D The story has been a blast to work on. If you're interested, there's a link on the bottom of my last post leading to the fic ;)

Edited at 2016-03-13 02:26 am (UTC)

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